Sunday, October 18, 2009

Kathryn Caskie asks "Who would Jane Austen do?

Who would Jane Austen do?

~Creating a hero~

Yeah, you can read it again but that’s what it says.

Who would Jane Austen do?

Funny as it might seem, that is one of the things I ask myself each time I start a new book. I write fun, Regency-set historical romance with lots of 1940s movie-style repartee. So my heroine, while reckless at times and maybe a bit outrageous for her day, is also witty and clever, much like Jane Austen. Oh, I kick it up. Pile on some character flaws, wounds from her past, quirks. No one likes a perfect heroine. But still, at her core is the essence of Jane Austen.

So when dreaming up the perfect hero for my heroine, I ask myself, who would Jane Austen do?

In The Most Wicked of Sins, the latest in my Seven Deadly Sins series, the heroine is Lady Ivy Sinclair. Ivy has a bit of a problem with envy, so when the gentleman she intends to marry is snatched away by her rival, she isn’t about to take it sitting down. She uses the last of her money to hire actor Dominic Sheridan to impersonate a marquess who is in love with her to set her intended into a jealous rage. Only Dominic isn’t at all the man she thinks he is—and he isn’t acting.

Now, when I came up with Dominic, I got first pick. Always do. I like my heroes tall and brawny—which is probably why I often write Scottish heroes of Highland descent. But not this time. Ivy is Scottish, so an Englishman would be a much better match.

Jane ‘s turn. He must be a clever and moral man, who can match her wit. A man who is open-minded, or like her Mr. Darcy, becomes so during the course of the romance.

My turn: Her weaknesses are his strengths and vice versa. Together they are stronger. Her sin is released by his virtue.

Jane’s turn: she is a salve to his emotional wounds and he to hers.

My turn: He has ebony hair and sizzling blue eyes.

Jane: Agreed.

HarperCollins Art Department’s turn: The cover is going to be black and his head would disappear.

My turn: Good point. His hair is bronze but his are still blue.

QUESTION OF THE DAY: Who would be your perfect hero? It can be anyone, living, dead, fictional and why? Three copies of The Most Wicked of Sins for the best replies! Pics (G-rated please) encouraged.



Prologue

July 30th, 1816
The Sinclair residence
No. 1 Grosvenor Square, London

The day had begun like any other.

Lady Ivy Sinclair rose at noon for breakfast, still weary from a late-night gala at Covent Gardens. She spread the Times out upon the dining table and giggled with her sisters, Siusan and Priscilla, over the outrageous and much-exaggerated society gossip in the weekly on dit column.

And when Poplin, one of only two servants in the household, set a sterling salver before her, Ivy sorted through the disappointingly few invitations and letters their family had received. She sipped weak, twice-strained tea, setting the more interesting of the invitations to her right as she munched on a wedge of toasted stale bread dabbed with a lick of comb honey.

Aye, as far as Ivy was concerned, the day had been entirely unremarkable. Perhaps even a bit mundane.

Until, that is, she broke the crimson wax wafer and released from its folds a letter from Scotland—one that would change her life forever. Of course, she didn’t know this for certain at the time, though the first sentence sent an unmistakable torrent of panic through her body.

“Of late, ye, Ivy, more so than any of my other children, have brought shame upon the Sinclair name.”

Oh God. Her eyelids snapped high. Each word had very nearly been carved into the foolscap, and Ivy recognized the angry, heavily inked script as belonging to the Duke of Sinclair, her father.

Her vision blurred with a rush of accumulating tears and her hands went cold as she raised the foolscap closer to her eyes.

“Will anything ever be enough for ye, or will ye continue to spend yer life peering hungrily over yer neighbors fence, coveting her life, her possessions, wishing her ill?”

She lifted cup of tea to her lips to stifle the whimper rising in her throat, but her hand began trembling fiercely, forcing her to return the cup clattering to its dish.

“I willna accept yer spoiled behavior any longer. Reform at once. Raise yerself up as a true example of decorum and respectability. Become a lady deserving of yer Lord Tinsdale’s admiration and standards—worthy of his troth instead of merely his amusement. Earn the respect the Sinclair name deserves—or when I return to London next month, ye will be regret it.”

Ivy’s jaw fell open and the whimper she had tried to contain suddenly slipped from her mouth. Even in his brevity, her father had reminded her of his expectations—and his harsh penalties for not meeting them—perfectly clear.

“Siusan,” Ivy jerked her head up to her elder sister. Though she tried to school her voice, to sound nonchalant, Ivy’s words sounded think with alarm and this frightened her.

Siusan’s elbows were propped upon the table, her chin resting wearily in her palms. “I already told you. No, to the Cockburn tea. Aye, to the Whitehall picnic.” Her eyelids looked heavy and she forcibly blinked her pale blue eyes. Her sigh made clear her boredom as she blew away a wisp of dark hair that had become ensnared in her thick lashes.

“N-not that.” Ivy tucked a lock of copper hair behind her ear and swallowed, hoping the extra moment would allow her to rein in her nerves. “This.” She started to pass the letter to Siusan, but Priscilla, the youngest of the Sinclair siblings, playfully snatched it from her hand and began to read.

“It’s from Da!” Priscilla leaped to her feet the moment she made the realization. Her vivid blue eyes immediately began shifting wildly from left to right as she read the letter.

Siusan’s eyes widened with worry and she slowly straightened her spine. She reached out and took Ivy’s hand and squeezed it. “What is it? The expression on your face is...well, positively ghastly. Though her eyelids were raised high her eyes were also seeming to squint. “Why, those are tears in your eyes.”

Ivy sucked her lips into the seam of her mouth for several seconds before speaking. Blood seem to drain from the rest of her body and into her restless legs. She came to her feet, unable to sit for a moment longer. “Tell me true, Siusan. Do you think it possible to convince Lord Tinsdale to offer for me—within a month?” She paced nervously back and forth behind Siusan’s chair.

“A month?” Siusan sat up straight in her chair and swiveled to look at her. “I was under the impression you had grown bored with him.”

Ivy’s feet stilled and she stared at Siusan, astounded by the comment. “Bored? You could not be farther from the mark. He has my full attention and rightly so. He is a good man, titled and respectable. Why, Da commented upon Tinsdale’s upstanding nature when he met the family at Sterling’s wedding.”

Siusan tilted her head and studied Ivy. “Hmm.”

“You haven’t answered me. Do you think it possible to secure an offer from him within a month?” Ivy asked, clutching at Siusan’s hand. “Please. Answer me.”

“Alright,” Siusan replied, wrenching her hand away from Ivy. “Tinsdale may be somewhat smitten with you, I’ll concede that, but he’s hardly at the point of getting leg-shackled. A month, Ivy? Are you completely mad?”

Priscilla slowly lifted her gaze from the letter. “No, Su, she’s not.” She rushed to Siusan and thrust the letter at her. “One month. It’s all the time she has.” She pointed at the letter. “I daresay there is no misunderstanding Da’s meaning. Read it!”

Siusan lowered her gaze to the foolscap and quickly read down its length.

Ivy resumed pacing the short distance behind Siusan’s chair. “I have one month to change my life, Su. If I fail, Da will surely keep the promise he made the night he forced us from our home for...this pauper’s existence in London.” Tears welled up anew in Ivy’s eyes, “and I’ll be disinherited...and cast from this very house to the workhouse.”

Siusan dropped the letter on the table as she rose, grabbing Ivy and hugging her tightly to her. “Dinna fash, Ivy. It willna come to that. I promise.”

Ivy took Siusan’s shoulders and leaned away from her. Through her tears, she peered at Siusan, then at Priscilla too. “How can you make such a promise?”

Her sisters exchanged meaningful glances and then Siusan took Ivy’s chin in her palm and tilted it upward, not allowing her to look away. “Because we will do whatever we must to prevent this, Ivy. Anything we must to see Tinsdale’s ring upon your finger,” Siusan said.

“Anything?” Ivy’s voice broke.

Priscilla nodded in agreement. “Aye, Ivy— anything. You have our promises.”

31 comments:

bridget3420 said...

I have to go with Edward Cullen. He's so yummy!

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Dina said...

My perfect hero is Gerard Butler, why? Have you seen him?? ;-)
He's charming and smart and can be many different people but he still has the same kind heart and soul and he would be a great protector. I'd feel safe near him. :)


Dina

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librarypat said...

Can't wait to read this whole series. I just got TO SIN WITH A STRANGER and will be getting the others as they come out. it is a wonderful plot line. The expanded excerpt of THE MOST WICKED OF SINS on her website is great.
My perfect hero - Daniel Day-Lewis' character in Last of the Mohicans. He is soft spoken, knows when to make hard decisions and live with them. You know you will be able to survive with him at your side.

Martha Lawson said...

Okay, maybe I'm older than everyone else - but I'd have to say Pierce Brosnan! God, that man is sexy, sauve debonair and that accent! He'd be perfect for Jane Austen..

mlawson17 at hotmail dot com

SiNn said...

You know i could go with alot of actors or stars and sure they r heros in everyone s eyes because of the parts they play but let me tell you about my hero thats my fiance hes an ex navy special forces sweetheart with an attitude to match hes strong and loving and wickedly bossy hes the person who is most deff worthy of all the hero worship he gets

now if ur asking about some movie star id have to say Mark Harmon or Pierce Brosnan mixed in with a lil bit of house but each to their own I guess

Blodeuedd said...

I have my hero, Richard Armitage
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ef8fa9.jpg
The first pic, well he would be perfect for a 19th century hero, and the other one for something else. He is just so so *faints*

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Jane said...

I would choose Eric Bana's Hector from "Troy." I know he loses his battle with Achilles, but Hector is honorable and determined to fight and defend his country and people.

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Bridget said...

Just blogged about this post on Win A Book. No need to enter me.

Virginia C said...

What a delicious question! The love of my life is Sam Elliott. He is gorgeous, masculine, has a twinkle in his eye, and has the courtliness of a Western gentleman from another era.

I also adore Gary Cooper, Gregory Peck, James Garner, and Gerard Butler.

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Diana Cosby said...

Hi Kathryn,
Congratulations on the release of The Most Wicked of Sins! Fun blog. My two perfect hero's are Gerard Butler and Jeffrey Dean Morgan - as portrayed in P.S. I Love You. In addition to the brogue, there's something amazing about a man who is strong enough to be gentle.
Take care and I wish you every success!

Sincerely,
Diana Cosby
Romance Edged With Danger

Margay said...

There are so many good choices out there, like Mick St. John from Moonlight (because his portrayer, Alex O'loughlin is just delicious - watch Three Rivers, you'll see what I mean), but I adore Captain Jack Sparrow of the Pirates movies. Not only is he easy on the eyes, he has a wit and a way about him that leaves you weak and just when you think that he is selfish and bad, he does something that tilts your opinion of him on its axis. There is just something about him...

Margay
Margay1122(at)aol(dot)com

Kathryn Caskie said...

Thanks for having me here today! Looking at the comments so far, this is going to be a fun--definitely drool-worthy day.

Gerard Butler is right up there. He fit all my Scottish hero criteria-- except for the dark hair.

We have to figure out how to post pics here-- so we can vote at end.

What is interesting is most all of the comments echo what Dina said--a protector.

I totally agree with Richard Armitage. When I wrote How to Propose to a Prince, he was my visual inspiration for the hero (in part because I needed a hero who resembled Prince Leopold who married Princess Charlotte. And he did (lucky me).

http://crossoflaeken.blogspot.com/2009/07/leopold-charlotte.html

Virginia said...

I think I will go back in time and choose Rhett Butley. True he was a bad boy but he loved Scarlett so deeply. I think he was a wonderful hero! I also love Castle! He is so yummy is a funny sort of way.

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Nancy said...

I'm going old school with my hero material. Cary Grant and James Garner, in great part for their humor. And Gardner McKay from a very long-ago show, Adventures in Paradise.

I love your books, Kathryn! Thank you for being with Terry!

Light,
Nancy Haddock

Kathryn Caskie said...

The first winner of a signed copy of The Most Wicked of Sins OR To Sin With a Stranger (your choice) is Bridget3420 for choosing a vampire hero. It is October, after all.

Please email terraontop57 at yahoo dot com with your snail mail address and your pick!

Two more drawings tonight!

Kathryn

janeausten01 said...

Colin Firth AKA Mr. Darcy, Toby Stephens AKA Mr. Rochester(Jane Eyre) I also agree about Gerald Butler:-)

Booklover1335 said...

My perfect hero...well he has already been written...and sorry Kathryn he isn't one of yours, but he is Scottish :)

My perfect hero is Jamie Fraser. He's tall, honorable, handsome with distinct and somewhat unusual features...after all not very many men can pull off red hair and still be considered sexy and the ultimate romantic hero. He has a sense of humor, is strong, rebellious when he feels it is right, but most importantly knows exactly who he is and makes no apologies about it.

Did I mention that he wears a kilt, and knows how to wield his sword (pun intended).

Can't wait to read the new book in the sins series. Thanks for the chance to win :)

cldivineATyahooDOTcom

c21joanne said...

My perfect hero would be Clark Gable performing Brett Butler in Gone with the WInd.

Armenia said...

My perfect hero is also Jamie Fraser. He has his faults which makes all that much more endearing. But he is also protective of all those that he loves. Just my perfect highlander hero.

Kathryn Caskie said...

The second winner is Booklover1335. Diana Gabaldon's Jamie was always one of my favorites. (But I have to admit, so many of the other heroes mentioned are too!)

Please send you snail mail to Terra (see homepage for addy). Congrats!

Along with your pick for The Most Wicked of Sins or To Sin With a Stranger. One more to go!

mariska said...

My favorite Hero will be Donovan O'shea (the Wild Sight) Cos he has a 'gift', to see something that others can't see :)
Mariska
uniquas at ymail dot com

bobbi said...

Okay,it's really hard to pick a favorite, but I'll say that Sir Percy from The Scarlet Pimpernel has always captured my fancy, and almost every rendition (and there have been many - from the original, clever book to the most recent A&E miniseries in the 90s) has been interesting and intriguing. Sir Percy is sexy, romantic, swashbuckling, fierce and highly intelligent as he saves French aristocrats out from under the nose of Madame Guillotine during the revolution. (Maybe they'll make a Gerard Butler version...?) ;o) And if you've never seen the 1982 TV miniseries with Jane Seymour and the amazing Anthony Andrews in a witty, brilliant adaption of the character, then run, don't walk to find and watch it ASAP!

Once again, love this series. Thanks for all the contests and the chances to win copies! :o)

bobbi

ddurance said...

That would be Sherrilyn Kenyon's Acheron. He's been through so much and he still has goodness inside of him. He would do anything for those he cares about.

Deidre
deidre_durance at hotmail dot com

stacey said...

I would think a werewolf would maybe played by Hugh Jackan.
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Kathryn Caskie said...

This is so hard! So many great heroes. Going with my gut, I will have t agree to with JaneAusten01. I agree with them all. Jane Austen would LOVe them all.

So, tonight, JaneAusten01 is the last winner (though so many others are drool worthy to say the least.0) I wish I had more time here to give away more books. Check out my site, www.KathrynCaskie.com for more chances to win books. You all are great with the best taste!
Cheers,
Kathryn

Marie said...

I'm going to go with Colonel Brandon (as played by Alan Rickman) -- he could rescue me any day :-)

marielay@gmail.com

Ester said...

Thanks for inviting me. This was an interesting topic and excerpt. It was hard to choose one hero from all the choices, but I would say Pierce Brosnan, when he played Remington Steele for his wit, charm, and good looks. But, my favorite character hero would be Sherilyn Kenyon's Julian of Macedon in Fantasy Lover. He was a great Spartan General, as well as a great lover!

Kathryn Caskie said...

Alan Rickman, yes! He isn't a classically handsome hero, but wow. I love his voice (even when he's playing Prof. Snape).

Now Pierce Brosnon, he LOOKS like a hero. Doesn't even have to say a word. He just is.

Thanks for stopping by.

Kathryn, who just saw her new cover (can't show it around yet, though I am dying to!) and the hero on the front cover is---well, he could have been on this list.

Maureen said...

I think I would pick Darcy from Pride and Prejudice because her changed so much during the story.
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Mari said...

I Love gerard Butler. What can I say I have a weakness for scots???
Perfect hero!

runningmatey at hotmail dot com

penney said...

I love this series and just got the book form B/N. I am so looking forward to the rest in this series.
Great blog today,
Thank you
Penney
Don't put me in the contest I just got your book.